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June 17, 2012
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Twilight and Pinkie in the sky by Dracodile Twilight and Pinkie in the sky by Dracodile
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Pinkies look rather off just hanging there, the ratio of her hips to her torso seems a little weird as is Twilights eyes and horn (But that's just being nit picky)

Over all I think it's a very good drawing and I wish I had half the talent you do although I'm not sure if I've seen this picture before so that's why the rating for originality is lower then is should be.

And lastely this has nothing to do with the picture but a 100 word minimum review is a little excessive, hell, right now I'm just padding it out so I can sumbit
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Ok, first I love that you combine Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Derpy together as those aren't an average combination from what I've seen.

Background: This piece is set on a really cool background of realistic clouds that are soft and airy. I find that really cool and well-done as clouds that are realistic can be hard for someponies to do. That being said they don't really fit the classic MLP:FIM type clouds as much, and those might have made this a little better to match the show, but that's just a personal bit.

All ponies: They need to have a little nostril showing which I cannot see. Body positions and dimensions, as well as proportions are above average and pretty well done (with the exception of Derpy's face, see below).

Twilight & Pinkie Pie: Their colors seem a tad lighter than desired on their coats, their tails and manes are fine. Their eyes could use some more defined eyelashes as well as a little iris color for twilight (just a little, not to remove the shocked effect you're going for). Twilight's tail could use a little bit more gravity pulling on it.

Pinkie's Balloons: The balloons are cool, and the realistic translucent and transparent elements make them look like balloons, but their edges seem to be a little bit off, I can't tell exactly what it is, but there's just something about the edges.

Derpy: Having Derpy sleeping up there in the clouds is very cute, but she needs to have a discernible snout. That being said Derpy's face is more rounded, but it still needs a little snout to really cement that Derpy look.

Color Selection: All characters are done pretty much as close to the hues that are in the show and are pretty well done.

Overall: This is a fairly decent work and is certainly above average quality. It's a very summery picture and surely is a good addition to the group galleries it is in.
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Penguinator24 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work!
GothGuru Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Earlier Derpy photobomb.
FluttershyAdorable Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ChiuuChiuu Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
I love it!
SolidSpy24 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Arthuurs Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
hero08 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So good, just fun to look at and catches a real sense of mood
ZebulonSmiley Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Pinkie in a deep voice: "COME WITH ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE."
DeJiKo07 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
Up, up, and away!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Delsin07 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
And thus Twilight learned that she didn't like heights. Or Pinkie after she had 3 lines of pure cane extract. Derpy however was oblivious to this and dreamt of the Doctor. (also grats on EQD feature)
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